Verb conjugation of "eventuate" in English

Today we have what we call 'hair dryer wind' (south wind from over the Alps), and it is around 30 degrees in Aarau. In some places even 31. Many people have headaches because of the weather.
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I like music very much too. I prefer classic music, but rock is also good. When you come to my Berlin we need to out to concerts together and visit a few bars. They are all close to the center.