In addition, may i know whether you are using external resources to translate? It is very important not to copy words from other dictionaries. Better to take just the best two translations for a certain word and not all translations.
My correction were added and highlighted with yellow markers and attached to this email. Tell me now if you have any questions about grammar rules, since I was a teacher 10 years ago.
Your English seems to be good. Can I meet you? I made a German language course, but my vocabulary is very limited. Unfortunately I do not speak German well, but I'll give my best. |
