I hope you can understand the corrections this way... Two small errors. let me know if there is a word or sentence or phrase that you didn't understand! I will try to think more on the "since" question...
We kept asking people how long the walk was and it seemed to stay half an hour even though we past half of it. On the way up, a group of children were playing traditional music for the tourists.
Does that give you enough information to get started with? If you would like to receive more information ask your private teacher, I am sure she knows all of it. Kind regards to your family. |
