Verb conjugation of "advance" in English

It looks like we need to invite Erika again to my home, once the cake is ready. Of course, this should be done before Sunday to stay in the chocolate cake race. We should buy cream too.
Could you please read the following offers in a critical manner and confirm it before I will send it? I have also mentioned the warranty and the software in the offer, because it was requested by the customer.
The people of Majorca are very friendly, helpful and prepared for tourism. The young tourist come here just to party, to meet other people and to have fun on the beach! Just right the right thing for me.