Verb conjugation of "dislodge" in English

I have contacted you 12 months ago to propose your school's inclusion in our language school directory. I wanted to inform you that our site achieved high positions in search engines last month.
My correction were added and highlighted with yellow markers and attached to this email. Tell me now if you have any questions about grammar rules, since I was a teacher 10 years ago.
You need to call before you leave... When there is good weather outside all restaurants open outside and the people sit in the sun, eat and drink. The lake is also very romantic in the late night.