Translation of peinador

I remember that after highschool I went to study English in New York. First I did not know whether the city was right for me cause I wanted a place where I would not feel lost. However, it was the right choice.
My correction were added and highlighted with yellow markers and attached to this email. Tell me now if you have any questions about grammar rules, since I was a teacher 10 years ago.
I want to learn more Spanish. I live in Basel, I am married and I have a sweet daughter called Monika. She is 3 years old. Are you doing sports or don't you like it? For me it is essential.