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I have started learning only one month ago, that was during the summer holidays, I want to go to Canada for three weeks and then participate in a course. I hope that I will improve it more or less.
Could you please read the following offers in a critical manner and confirm it before I will send it? I have also mentioned the warranty and the software in the offer, because it was requested by the customer.
Many thanks for the corrections. Exactly what I needed to be happy. I want to learn French because it's a great language and because it sound so romantic to me. There is a lot more to improve.
Could you please read the following offers in a critical manner and confirm it before I will send it? I have also mentioned the warranty and the software in the offer, because it was requested by the customer.
Many thanks for the corrections. Exactly what I needed to be happy. I want to learn French because it's a great language and because it sound so romantic to me. There is a lot more to improve.