Translation of conscription in Spanish

Hello, I am John, I'm 29 years old, I have lived in Heidelberg all my life, I have a son and I am working at Lenzemanner in the South of Germany since 1980. I look forward to hearing from you.
In the attachment you will find the reviewed documents. Your Portuguese is quite good. I understood everything. If you write the same text in German, I can know what you wanted to say.
I was one time in Jerusalem and in Tel Aviv! Fantastic two cities. I liked Tel Aviv, and I want to get back soon. I want also to visit more cities around the globe, especially in East Asia.