Translation of indecent in Spanish

Are you a man or a woman? You have no picture in your profile, and I do not know whether the user name loli2938 belongs to a man or a woman, but actually it does not matter to me. I am here for the Spanish.
My correction were added and highlighted with yellow markers and attached to this email. Tell me now if you have any questions about grammar rules, since I was a teacher 10 years ago.
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